Once upon a time in a quiet town
During midnight when everything slows down
A young child waits for Santa to come down
Touch down to the ground in this small hometown
Wishing for Christmas to come haste he lay
Santa Claus please come to town come today
Come to town riding on your reindeer sleigh
Laughing Ho Ho Ho spreading love, I pray
At that moment he heard the Ho Ho Ho
The jolly laughter ringing cross the snow
A sleigh full of presents to give and go
Happiness and love spread through town, Bravo!
And so the little child’s wish had come true
Presents left for everyone, me and you
And the town’s spirit rising up a new
Santa flew away in the midnight blue
nice ballad
답글삭제WoW! Josh! This is so nice! It's magnificent! It's thoughtful! It's concise! It's sentimental! It's omnipotent! It's humongous! It's previleged! It's idealistc! It's illuminated! It overcame your limits! It is beautiful! It's romantic! But it's invisible...
답글삭제Hahaha, this is cute. You used good rhyme scheme: aabb ccdd eeff. Are the last two, ben and end supposed to rhyme?
답글삭제Overall, it draws a good story with images in my head; nice job!